Therewasoncealittleturtlethatwantedtobethefastedanimalinthejungle,everybodylaughedathimandsaidthathecouldneverbethefastedanimalever。Btlistentothem,andinstead,hewasthefastedanimalinthejungleohyes。Infact,everyanimalwenttolearnfromtheharehadbecomethefastedrunnerstoo。Whentheturtletoldtheharethathewantedtobethefastedrunnerinthejungle,Oh,oh!criedthehare,Turtle,ifyouwanttobethefasted,thenyoumustgetthatbigshellofyourback,Haha! Theturtlewasnotveryhappyaboutwhathehadjustheardfromthehare,andheeventuallydecidedtoprovetohimthatitwashisdutytobethefastedrunnerofthejungle。Howaboutthis,Isaidtheturtlesuddenly,theharelaughedaloudagain,Ohturtle,ttellmethatyouarenotgoingtogiveup!Iamnot,Ihavetheheartinsidemybody,andIdonotbelievethatItbethefastedrunnerinthejungle!theharethenfinallyagreedtoracewithhim。 Whenthetimearrived,whenthesoundbegantoblow,theturtlewalkedalongslowly。Whilethehareintheothercasehoppedabouthappily。Doeshereallythinkthathecouldbeatme?!shoutedthehare,Tsaidthehareagain。Whenhewasalmostatthefinishline,theharesaidtohim,Ishalltakearest,thenwhenIandIcrossthefinishline,sayingthat,theharelaydownasleep。Thesoonfoundthehare,andcrossedhimquietly,whenhereachedthefinishline,whentheharewokeup,tinfrontofhim。 Hehoppedabouthappily,andwhenhereachedtheline,hefoundtheturtlealreadyrestingonarock。Theharewassoshockedthathelaydownonthegrassjustlikethathefainted。Anobodyeverlaughedathimeveragain,andwheneversomeanimalswantedtolearnrunning,sincehewasnotyetthefastestanymore,insteadtheywenttotheturtletogetadvicefromtheirnewjunglerunninglessonteacher。 修改后 spanTherewasoncealittleturtlethatwantedtobethefastestanimalinthejungle,everybodylaughedathimandsaidthathecouldneverbethefastestanimalever。Btlistentothem,andinstead,hewasthefastestanimalinthejungleohyes。Infact,everyanimalwenttolearnfromtheharehadbecomethefastrunnerstoo。Whentheturtletoldtheharethathewantedtobethefastestrunnerinthejungle,Oh,oh!criedthehare,Turtle,ifyouwanttobethefastest,thenyoumustgetthatbigshellofyourback,Haha! Theturtlewasnotveryhappyaboutwhathehadjustheardfromthehare,andheeventuallydecidedtoprovetohimthatitwashisdutytobethefastestrunnerofthejungle。Howaboutthis,youandIsaidtheturtlesuddenly,theharelaughedaloudagain,Ohturtle,ttellmethatyouarenotgoingtogiveup!Iamnot,Ihavetheheartinsidemybody,andIdonotbelievethatItbethefastestrunnerinthejungle!theharethenfinallyagreedtoracewithhim。 Whenthetimearrived,whenthesoundbegantoblow,theturtlewalkedalongslowly。Whilethehareintheothercasehoppedabouthappily。Doeshereallythinkthathecouldbeatme?!shoutedthehare,Tsaidthehareagain。Whenhewasalmostatthefinishline,theharesaidtohim,Ishalltakearest,thenwhenIandIcrossthefinishline,sayingthat,theharelaydownasleep。Thesoonfoundthehare,andcrossedhimquietly,whenhereachedthefinishline,whentheharewokeup,tinfrontofhim。 Hehoppedabouthappily,andwhenhereachedtheline,hefoundtheturtlealreadyrestingonarock。Theharewassoshockedthathelaydownonthegrassjustlikethathefainted。Anobodyeverlaughedathimeveragain,andwheneversomeanimalswantedtolearnrunning,sincehewasnotyetthefastestanymore,insteadtheywenttotheturtletogetadvicefromtheirnewjunglerunninglessonteacher。 四年级:欧阳雨鹭